I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Guten tag Jesse short but still a great post.You managed to tell me what you were doing in one sentence good job. However in the start theirs a part which needs an extra full stop or comer. I really liked the idea of of my brother and his friends in the garage.
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