I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Well done Jesse. I really like the facts that you have included about artists and their songs. It's great that Mr White shared his knowledge about Tipperary with you. Keep an eye on your punctuation to ensure that your presentation is easy to read and looks the best that it can. Mrs Hastie
Hi Jesse how are you? I was looking through your blog and I saw this post about Music. You did really well on your post but maybe next time you could add more in you introduction and next time you could put your writing bigger.
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Well done Jesse. I really like the facts that you have included about artists and their songs. It's great that Mr White shared his knowledge about Tipperary with you. Keep an eye on your punctuation to ensure that your presentation is easy to read and looks the best that it can. Mrs Hastie
ReplyDeleteHi Jesse how are you? I was looking through your blog and I saw this post about Music. You did really well on your post but maybe next time you could add more in you introduction and next time you could put your writing bigger.
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