I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia Ora Jesse, I enjoyed reading your journal, my favourite page was the ones about super powers and the earth celebration. Maybe next time you could proofread your writing a bit or finish writing your journal.
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Kia Ora Jesse,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your journal, my favourite page was the ones about super powers and the earth celebration. Maybe next time you could proofread your writing a bit or finish writing your journal.
Thanks for posting, Astin