I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Jesse Im Maddie from Blaketown School, I do understand this bully free week, how did you come up with so many ideas for this and how did you come up with a bully free week, are any other people doing the same as you? I love the bright colours and nice words to make bullies stop, but how do you think this can stop bullies stop bullying? I hope this stops bullies in your school and can help people who are trying to stop bullying. By Maddie
Kia ora, milla here from gilberthorpe school i enjoyed that you made it so outstanding . You could add a little bit more writing plus make it bigger ! well done
kia ora jesse Christina here im from gilberthorpe school i like the way you put up bully free week up and its so colourful and nice next time you should put more pink it will look much better with more of the pink
Hi Jesse its Dani your bully free poster its cool but could you add more writing and explain but I love the fun you put in it just could you add maybe pictures about it but amazing job bye.
Hi Jesse your bully free poster is cool but you could make the the writing a different colour and add a little bit more writing as well but it is very good overall bye.
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Hey Jesse Im Maddie from Blaketown School, I do understand this bully free week, how did you come up with so many ideas for this and how did you come up with a bully free week, are any other people doing the same as you? I love the bright colours and nice words to make bullies stop, but how do you think this can stop bullies stop bullying? I hope this stops bullies in your school and can help people who are trying to stop bullying.
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Hi Jesse Im Morgan I love your poster I think that you did a great job is very good but it was a bit hard to read.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, milla here from gilberthorpe school i enjoyed that you made it so outstanding . You could add a little bit more writing plus make it bigger ! well done
ReplyDeletekia ora jesse Christina here im from gilberthorpe school i like the way you put up bully free week up and its so colourful and nice next time you should put more pink it will look much better with more of the pink
ReplyDeleteKia ora liv and your wrok it cool but you need to get mone wrok to be it but good wrok at it now you
ReplyDeleteHi Jesse its Dani your bully free poster its cool but could you add more writing and explain but I love the fun you put in it just could you add maybe pictures about it but amazing job bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Jesse your bully free poster is cool but you could make the the writing a different colour and add a little bit more writing as well but it is very good overall bye.
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