I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Jesse Sita here... It was really fun when he came his version of Miss Waho was sooooooo hileriouse! I like how you added a picture of him so other people from different schoos know what he looks like. I also like how you added in some of the books that he has written and added the video to him reading it. I have a question... have you ever red any other of his books that he hasent showed us?? Thats all for now. BYE!!!!
Hi Jesse it's your friend Hunter. I like your post because I like animations. This reminds me of the journey begins animation that were doing with kaunteya. Some advice is to write a little bit before you put the animation off.
Kia ora Jesse. I am glad that you created a slide to show and tell about Scott. It included some good information. Next time you need write an introduction at the top of your post so the reader knows what you are sharing.
Talofa Lava,Bonjour,Namaste Chloe here Nice work with your amazing slide about Scott.I think you know a lot about his amazing work and intelligence.
What book of his do you like? The next time he comes maybe you culd ask him to draw a picture of mr wilconson I think that would be pretty funny for the whole school to watch.
Hi Jesse good job on this next time you guys should put more slides on to make it better.The story he made called i'm not a worm was really funny. How long did it take you guys to make this? Also another question is was it fun making this slide with a bunch of different people?
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Kia ora Jesse Sita here...
ReplyDeleteIt was really fun when he came his version of Miss Waho was sooooooo hileriouse! I like how you added a picture of him so other people from different schoos know what he looks like. I also like how you added in some of the books that he has written and added the video to him reading it.
I have a question...
have you ever red any other of his books that he hasent showed us??
Thats all for now.
BYE!!!!
Hi sita Jesse here no I have not read any of those books. blog you later!!!
DeleteHi jesse it is bailey here i like that shark attack slide good job by bailey.
ReplyDeleteHi Jesse it's your friend Hunter. I like your post because I like animations. This reminds me of the journey begins animation that were doing with kaunteya. Some advice is to write a little bit before you put the animation off.
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter it's Jesse here thanks for the advice. blog you later!!!
DeleteKia ora Jesse.
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you created a slide to show and tell about Scott. It included some good information. Next time you need write an introduction at the top of your post so the reader knows what you are sharing.
Talofa Lava,Bonjour,Namaste
ReplyDeleteChloe here
Nice work with your amazing slide about Scott.I think you know a lot about his amazing work and intelligence.
What book of his do you like?
The next time he comes maybe you culd ask him to draw a picture of mr wilconson I think that would be pretty funny for the whole school to watch.
nice blogging bye
hello jesse you should tell us more about scott thats all BYE! FROM NOAH!
ReplyDeleteHi Jesse good job on this next time you guys should put more slides on to make it better.The story he made called i'm not a worm was really funny. How long did it take you guys to make this? Also another question is was it fun making this slide with a bunch of different people?
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