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Wednesday, April 6, 2016

jesse mihi



This is my mihi this took a long time and this is about my family and about me and its in maori.

11 comments:

  1. nice that is awesome next time your awesome

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  2. You have picked out some pretty cool images. Next time make sure that you have put a capital letter at the start of peoples names.

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  3. I like the way you put a capital letter at the start of your sentance.

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  4. well done jesse love your picturs and next time put capitils at the start of each persons name

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    1. Thank you I will do it next time.

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  5. amazing job jesse you just need to put som uper case letters in the names of the places

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  6. good job jeses :-)

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