I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi jesse i liked the bit where you put the bear running after the girl.my favorite part was the bear's ear got cut off.maybe next time put some more amateing in it.blog you later!.
Hi Jesse its Emma here from greymain school. You have made a great animation. How long did it take you to make it? did you enjoy making it? Maybe next time put in more photo's. Great job. Emma
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Kia ora Jesse
ReplyDeleteChloe here
Nice work on this amazing animation I like how there is a guy fighting the bear away from the other person.
How did you get the bears head of its body?
Nice job on all of it maybe next time make sure there is on eof each slide on some of them there was like 13 slide of the same one.
Blog you later
Hi Chloe it's Jesse here I don't know how Angus did that and thanks for telling us that. blog you later!!!
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ReplyDeleteNirvana here
Nice work on this amazing slide. I like how there is a guy fighting the bear away from the other person.
How did you get the bears head off its body?
Nice job on all of it maybe next time make sure there is some eof each slide like there was on 13 slide one.
blog ya later
Hi jesse i liked the bit where you put the bear running after the girl.my favorite part was the bear's ear got cut off.maybe next time put some more amateing in it.blog you later!.
ReplyDeleteHi Jesse its Emma here from greymain school.
ReplyDeleteYou have made a great animation. How long did it take you to make it? did you enjoy making it? Maybe next time put in more photo's. Great job. Emma
Hi Emma it's Jesse here it took me and Angus 3 days. I did enjoy making it and next time I will put more photos in it. blog you later!!!
DeleteHi Jesse why do you add it all kfc. But you did a awesome job. Plus why did the girl eat the rabbit's head you should of made it get cooked bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Dani it's Jesse here Angus did the KFC on it. blog you later!!!
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