What we had done so far

Hi bloggers today in art hurumanu we are in pears and we fixed up our baddies writing and we rated each other 6 is the highest he gave me a 4 for a idea a 5 for structure and language if you don't know what I mean by writing I mean our narrative story for our clay animation. We haven't finished our clay people but we have finished the wolf and the volcano anyway here's it is. By the way the title it called Manaakitanga.

Once in the morning there was a wolf and a piranha, they were BEST FRIENDS for a long long time. They were basically friends since they were born but when they grew up they had to walk and swim along way and they got sick of walking and swimming to the shore so so much. Because the wolf's feet always got sore and the piranha’s caudal pin got sore, they made a plan but when they tried to make up the plan they couldn’t think of anything. 

The very next day they talked and they saw people, one person went over to the piranha and the wolf. He wondered what it was they tried to hide but they had nowhere to go so the person who saw what it was ran to go warn the other people.The people got some sharp wooden sticks. They ran after them some of them swam and some of them ran. When they got to them the piranha said “we just want to be friends”. The people were shocked that the piranha could talk. 

They decided to let the piranha and wolf live but the piranha said “can you help us make a plan so that we don’t have to walk and swim that far?” One person said, “just live closer to the shore so you don’t have to walk and swim so far,” but the wolf said “no that’s too easy” so they tried to make a really good plan. The plan was to make something so the wolf can pull around the piranha but then some earthquakes happened and they seen a volcano exploding they ran away and hid until they were safe. 

The volcano finished and surprisingly they didn’t die they were thankful for not dying. They found what they were making and finished it off. But the bad piranha came and said what are you guys and gals doing in my ocean one person said “ Wait so your saying that the whole entire ocean is yours” the bad piranha said back “no no no your so dumb. I meant this part of the ocean is mine” but the good piranha didn’t take it so they had a fight. The good piranha won and they got it done and they lived happily ever after.

So I hope you enjoyed reading my narrative story. BLOG YOU LATER!!!