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Thursday, May 25, 2017

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‘’Grab your bikes and your helmets’’mum said as we went out the door. Me and my brother got our bikes and our helmets then we biked to bicolour park for lunch.
It was a short time antell we were there.We had fish n chips for lunch after lunch we biked home when we got home I played on the drift chriks. I played a racing game on the drift chriks with my brother it was a fun game I wan 2 time my brother wan 1 time. That was a fun day.
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  1. Mrs PamMay 25, 2017 at 8:45 PM

    Hi Jesse, It looks like you had a really great day. You were a bit lucky to get fish and chips for lunch. I like that you have used speech marks in your writing. Well done. Mrs Pam

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  2. Miss MorganMay 29, 2017 at 6:04 PM

    Hey Jesse, what an awesome start to your story. It makes it so interesting! I also like that you said it was a short time until you got there. I wonder what you got from the fish and chip shop? I always get a hotdog! Super yum with sauce!

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