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Thursday, April 14, 2016

sick day
On Friday I was sick so my aunt had to go to work but she fand out that she didn’t have to go to work and when my dad.Come to peck me up my acole arsd if my dad cod go whith hem to pacinsave and when he got back we got some fiua would then we went home and peck up my brether’s and then went. Home and we had a little play at nane’s and.Then went home and my mum came back from work and we went.To the park for a little play at the park then went home to.Get into awr pejas then went to bed.     

  

3 comments:

  1. Hi Jesse there is some spelling mistacts.

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  2. Junior Hub Comments
    I love your story I wish I could write that much. I like it so much I wish I could read it everyday. What park did you go to? - Brodie and Lachlan
    I like the background - Hakeem

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  3. Hi Jesse
    Its keisha here
    I love the red
    You should fix the spelling!
    Next time make NO background in the writing!
    From Keisha

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