I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, November 8, 2016
writing
The Marshmallow
The monster from the sea spied on the good boy. The monster swam deep down ‘splash’ in the water towards the good boy. He looked at the squishy and hot and yummy marshmallow. From the sea That looks like a delicious treat. Then the boy reached into the bag. There was no more marshmallows and the monster went angry. The boy ran away and found a pillow and threw it. The monster went to go get it. Then the monster sat by the fire the monster put the pillow over the fire because the monster thort that it was a marshmallow. Whilel the monster thort that it was a marshmallow the boy ran away. Then the pillow disappeared! When the monster put it over the fire Then the monster was angry and He said “Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr” by Jesse and Baily
The monster from the sea spied on the good boy. The monster swam deep down ‘splash’ in the water towards the good boy. He looked at the squishy and hot and yummy marshmallow. From the sea That looks like a delicious treat. Then the boy reached into the bag. There was no more marshmallows and the monster went angry. The boy ran away and found a pillow and threw it. The monster went to go get it. Then the monster sat by the fire the monster put the pillow over the fire because the monster thort that it was a marshmallow. Whilel the monster thort that it was a marshmallow the boy ran away. Then the pillow disappeared! When the monster put it over the fire Then the monster was angry and He said “Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr” by Jesse and Baily
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