I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, June 21, 2019
Writing About Our Shoes
I have a friend he puts these big smelly things in me then he grabs my hair and he ties them in a double knot and it stings. But when he's not here I go into the heaven cupboard aka the food cupboard. by the way I forgot to introduce myself my name is shoe. When I go into the lounge I always see a really bright flashy thing it always blinds me I always walk into a wall its always the same wall hes not my friend his names bully bill at least thats what I call him his real name is wall. When I go into his bedroom I see my friend Xbox he's a really cool Xbox I recon he's the best Xbox where really tight but he never moves he says he's lazy but I think he can't because ether he eats to much or because on the cords attached to him. When I go outside I play with his dog but he always steps on me. When my mum tells me to try bring in the washing I jump and jump but I never make it but when he comes back he does the washing even know he pulls my hair into a double knot he helps me.
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